I appreciate that you spent a lot of time on this, it really shows through lighting, environments etc. But I couldn't really get behind the whole boyfriend thing. It really stunted the character for me. In fact I would go so far as to say that it ruined it for me.
The models were very nice, I especially liked Ridley's. However I'm not too sure whether you recreated the models yourself or just ripped them from one of the games (probs OtherM).
If not: That was the pieces strongest point.
If so: Boooooooooo
Also something that kind of bothered me was the amount of clipping. I could ignore the hair slipping through her suit at the start, but it really annoyed me at the point of the animation when she got up after her battle with Ridley and she put her hand around her waist, her arm and chest just went right through her leg like "WHOOOOSH" http://puu.sh/aPgva/3ee6085e64.jpg You may of had a deadline, but it really had this underlying feeling that it wasn't polished to the best of it's ability, that sucked a little bit.
Anyway, it was nice, but it wasn't great for me.